http://www.pcworld.com/article/2043327/how-we-sabotage-our-own-privacy-for-deals-and-ego.html
This article is about how some people try to be very secure online by using long passwords, not shopping online or using any social media. It is mentioned that it is nearly impossible to be secure because once anything is done online someone can find a trace of it if they really wanted to do so. A survey was administered across a few countries asking if he or she cared about who can see their personal information online and of course America is one of the worst offenders. Americans do not pay much attention to who can see the information that is posted online. If it is cheaper online then he or she is willing to buy it because it is slightly cheaper and they do not give any regards of who can see what they are doing or buying. Lastly, the article also mentioned the only way to be truly off the grid is to grow your own food, never get sick and have no utilities. This would be near impossible for the average person in this wonderful technology era.
Personally I do not think people really care about what they do online, as the article above proved to be true. Ever since the whole NSA scandal people were appalled at what they were able to do but to be honest anyone with some technological experience can get personal information from someone if they wanted to do so. People, in general, just need to be careful with what they do online. There are some basic things that majority of people do not know how to avoid such as spam/scam e-mails that can hack information on a person's computer. Just make sure you think about what you are doing online before doing anything of importance such as taxes or using a check or credit card.
Capitalize 'It' second sentence
ReplyDelete'was done' - you can do better than that Dylon
That same sentence you are talking about 'personal data' but I don't see a mention of it.
'America' and 'their' don't work together. Nouns and pronouns have to sync.
I know you can write better than this.